Posted by ani_aset in ,

As i walk through

this empty street
this loneliness that 
wants to creep

My shadow is tired
it needs to rest
search continues
rest mind rest

Still reaching out
with tired hands
i don't need help
please understand

Just a hug
a smile,some sleep
a sweet embrace
is all i need

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'Sometimes I wish, I was a little kid again....skinned knees are easier to fix than broken heart'

This is what flashed into my mind after reading your posts.....Smile dear :) Life is too short to spend it like this.....and after a while, you will realize that nothing and no one is worth it. All that matters is You and you owe all the happiness to yourself :)

January 8, 2009 at 9:26 AM

thanks neha for the words :)..i am smiling

February 2, 2009 at 8:52 AM


February 2, 2009 at 9:25 PM

the poem has a cold lonliness but with a strong confidence about the upcoming comfort. the last para has a wonderful hope which balances the whole poem beautifully!

nice work keep coming with more!

February 18, 2009 at 12:55 PM

a very good write =)
keep it up
this is my first time in your blog
will try to catch up for the other posts too.
best of luck

February 28, 2009 at 12:20 PM

@todays writer: thanks for your nice comments...i will try and come up with more..well when i was writing this poem...i thought not many will like it as its too sad and lonely..but i'm glad people like it
@knee:thanks for the lovely comment..went through your posts too..you write lovely poems..keep it up

March 22, 2009 at 12:32 AM

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